»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #47
»
Souls
| Open Poetry #47 |
|
Souls |
|
|
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Souls When souls meet you can feel the heat of past sparks which flew before time and they themselves knew There's a flicker in the eyes awakening alive that which had slept when hearts hadn't yet met Gentle whispers unspoken once long ago enlivened softly brings to memory images of you and me A pulsating warmth when hands met so familiar the healing touch remembered together comforting and deep Choose now to recognize or let the past lay for tomorrow may be long and the day be finally gone When souls meet you can feel the heat of past sparks which flew before time and they themselves knew. E.M.L. |
||
| © Copyright 2011 E. M. L. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
in the twists of time she was never mine but I knew what she would have meant to me |
||
|
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
"When souls meet you can feel the heat" Love that line! enjoyed Kat >^..^< |
||
|
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"A pulsating warmth when hands met so familiar the healing touch remembered together comforting and deep" I think you have captured many "Souls" with this write.  JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E, you paint the shoe repair shop so vividly here...well done |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I wrote a poem many years ago which had as its premise that in this cosmos there are two people who already knew each other, and it is merely on a chance meeting that they fell this and thereby two souls blend with the other and we call it love. Your poem says basically the sane thing, except on a much higher plane. ~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~ |
||
|
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love this premise and how you layed it out. great write! Lori |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reuniting souls, yes that is such an intriguing feeling. You say it most beautifully, dear Ebonygirl. Love, Margherita |
||
|
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Krawdad- "... I knew what she would have meant to me..." beautiful and sorrowful, sending you blessings for a love to come your way, Ms. E Katahdin- Thank you, appreciate you, Ms. E JL- the healing touch is magical, isn't it JL. DS- I know of a shoe shine man in need of a soul... mate. JP2- Please repost your poem, I would love to read it. Lori- I appreciate your message, Thank you, Ms. E Margherita- An intriguing feeling, indeed, I wonder how often it occurs? I love to hear stories of how people met. Thank you, Ms. E |
||
|
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Deep and divine, Edna. I wrote something similar once. Ida |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful description of soulmates... and how they come to be. *S* |
||
|
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
when souls meet unexpectedly the moment's often tense holding our breath as if waiting to fly........ Enoyed this write thnx 4 the post!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
||
|
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Ida- Thank you, I would like to read your poem, please post it for us, Ms. e Suthern- Have you found your soulmate yet, I hope so, Thanks Ms. e Angel4aking- Yes, waiting to fly! Thank you, Ms. e |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
||
|
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written, my friend...definitely subscribe to your premise. j. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
