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just fragile with laughter
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just fragile with laughter |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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rivers are moan song saliva on brim of canyon smiles you are a woman dancing in mind pools mending wearing only the shimmer of love skin so boldly and you weep not the passing of spent evenings we can smell the mountains in fur and pine scent but your perfume when aroused stirs me more you say you are just camp fire friendly warm fitting into my heart pocket without fingers clasping within the palm where life lines join and love lines are crisscross coated playthings tying each other into knots within knots slipping until they are locked without concern of losing there is a meadow at our eden side of heaven with sigh grass so tall it bothers your ribs when you are nude skin galloping your limbs to bend the arms of a man tree without leaves around you, sometimes just fragile with laughter _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Too many reasons, but suffice to say, this is getting a special light in my library... and oh to walk the winding roads of Big Bear again....  *clicking library button* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun...be careful along 118 or 38...some unruly biker type might stop and pull you onto the back of that Harley and make you hang on for dear life...let me know when you arrive? Thank babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and you weep not the passing of spent evenings I think I'll leave the hiking and the Harley to others... for I'm going to curl up with this line and the title and just wish. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...you are so sexy when you curl up that way..thanks special lady!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
there is a meadow at our eden side of heaven with sigh grass so tall it bothers your ribs when you are nude skin galloping your limbs to bend the arms of a man tree without leaves around you, sometimes just fragile with laughter If you were reading this to an audience I think that there would be a thunderous applause, seasoned with deep sighs of pleasure ...  I will say what dear Alison sometimes says "I will go to sleep now with the echoes of this poem" ... Fantastic! Love, Margherita |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
very deep and enchanting....suited for the prince and princess themselves! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for your lady eyes ms ___________ ms king, thank you scooter girl friend |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
" until they are locked without concern of losing" Words of light and freedom, enjoyed, Ms.E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...thank you lady friend... |
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