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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2011-09-12 12:57 PM



It's in the genes of a women
the way the soul moves
between the layers
of forget me nots
and pillow talk

it's in the breath of a man
that way his heart speaks to mine
beneath the markings of time
that has passed tho has yet to pass us by

it's in the corners
that you never looked
when you were looking for
what you couldn't find
since you weren't sure
if what it was
wasn't what?
but rather
who?  
could it be you?

~~~kingsangel~~~

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1 posted 2011-09-12 03:58 PM


it's in the corners
that you never looked
when you were looking for
what you couldn't find

These lines have particular appeal for me today since I started it with a frantic search... and it was in the corners where I never looked when I was looking for it. *S*

JL
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-09-12 08:00 PM


Sometimes we tend to overlook the obvious.
But being in a corner has its advantage of being unexamined.

Enjoyed the write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2011-09-17 06:19 PM


Thank you both for your replys....I wasn't sure where this was leading and I think I am picking up a whole new style over the last couple of years....I guess it is about what I have been doing lately finding one-self...the words just seemed to fall into place ....



~~~kingsangel~~~

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