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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-09-11 08:09 AM



and with this bending of dawn's bow
like the leaning of the beckon tree
when it winds around fingers of wind

when her leaves are nudity turned over
so the wet side is lipstick welcome color
and falling is foreplay for the landing

do you bring me that honey you spilled
that glistened your bosom to shimmer
then was the sweet syrup a freeway line

so carefully drawn into tattoos around
each gateway to my soul in gathered gaze
as if there at the core of your woman side

were terracotta arms in empty fragile fabric


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daark

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ebonygirl
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1 posted 2011-09-11 04:48 PM


"so carefully drawn into tattoos around
each gateway to my soul in gathered gaze"

Dark -enjoyed your words, they remind me of Byron,
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-09-11 04:53 PM


Thanks ms E, I am sure would roll his eyes.
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-09-12 05:41 AM


as if there at the core of your woman side

were terracotta arms in empty fragile fabric


It's your words that always beckon to be savoured in sips of honey, with their special flavor that has no equal, dear Poet.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-09-12 06:38 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend
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5 posted 2011-09-12 03:04 PM


when it winds around fingers of wind

Your phrasing is so unique and beautiful... you write entire poems in every line!

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-09-12 03:10 PM


Ms suthern, you make me smile with your eyes on my words. Thank you


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