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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-09-11 07:47 AM


    
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today brings a chill
a space I can't fill
we're complacence still
to enemies' will
our blood they will spill
to them its a thrill
prophecy fulfill
they can’t wait until
all of us they kill


~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-09-11 08:48 AM


yep, you said it. Right to the point Jerry as always. It struck me when you said complacence because they say "don't let the terroist win by showing fear" Isn't that what complacence looks like? Isn't that a false sense of security we fall into? Good write my friend
Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-09-11 08:54 AM


Yes, that is what complacence is all about, Lori. Thank you for seeing how things really are and not how they tell us they are.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

icebox
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3 posted 2011-09-11 11:00 AM


"we're complacence still
to enemies' will"

So very true!




JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-09-11 11:59 AM


Thank you Ice. We are and it is killing me to watch what is taking place in Washington. It started before Hussein, but it is completely out of control now.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2011-09-11 01:34 PM


You are so right here, Jerry and Lori, when they say we should just go about our business and show no fear, I say, "You go first."
                            Ida

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-09-11 02:10 PM


Thank you, Ida. I blame a lot of people for America's complacency. Hollywood. Politicians. News Media. And a growing number of U.S. citizens who have been taught by the public school system to HATE America.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-09-11 04:16 PM


JP2, Your message is clear and seconded by me,
Thank you,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-09-11 04:35 PM


Thank you so much, Ms. E, for being here and on the same page.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

Margherita
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9 posted 2011-09-12 06:13 AM


They will not, dear Jerry, if the circle of violence can be stopped. Indeed the chill grips our hearts, as you say so powerfully, when we remember and continue to see actions rooted in hate.

"Religious" fundamentalism that induce to kill in the name of the Creator (whatever name we give Him), is the worst wound in human hearts that needs to be healed.

All healing occurs through one tool that comprises: love, justice, compassion. No complacence in that.

May we all awaken to love.

Love and peace.
Margherita  

JL
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10 posted 2011-09-12 06:53 AM


So true, Jerry2Pat.
So sad but so true.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2011-09-12 07:07 AM


Thank you, Margherita, for your thoughts.

JL, appreciate you being here . . .

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2011-09-14 05:33 PM


Fine writing...James
JerryPat2
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13 posted 2011-09-14 07:30 PM


Thank you,James.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

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