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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2011-09-07 01:02 PM


Beer slogans folks, for guys like me,
Are easy to corrupt
You change a few words here and there,
it's all kind of abrupt

Before you even stop to think,
"My God, what have I done?"
It's Balladeer's the "Deer" to have
when you're having this much fun

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-09-07 03:53 PM


Wow...
Material is a bit flat?  Kinda like that slogan, or the beer itself.
I think you need a refill...


Always enjoy your silliness.
No, really, I do...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA
2 posted 2011-09-07 10:34 PM


JL,
Thanks, I added the "beer" tangent to the "deer" tangent today and guess I came up with mixed results. Maybe tomorrow I'll "hop" to something else.(ouch!)
Doc

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