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ebonygirl
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0 posted 2011-09-07 12:28 PM


FREE

I am freed

The freedom is intoxicating

The freedom lasts a lifetime

I am free to let it go

I am free to harbor no resentment

I am free to understand others and their weaknesses

I am free to champion others

I am free to know my  own light

I am free to know my own darkness

I am freed from my past mistakes

I am freed to forgive my mistakes in the future

I am free to love myself

I am free to love others without condition

I am free to love you
when you arrive.


E.M.L - Sept. 17, 2011


© Copyright 2011 E. M. L. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-07 04:19 AM


Ahhh, the fragrance of freedom, you sprinkled it all over the page here, dear Ebonygirl.

Beautiful profession of freedom.

quote:
I am free to love you
when you arrive


You have the power and freedom of loving him into manifestation, which means you already love him, even if you can't see him yet, except in your visualization. Your love works as a magnet. Remember? "Do as if you had already received!" ... says the Gospel.

Very very beautiful song of your heart.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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2 posted 2011-09-07 06:37 AM


from the date I assume this will occur in the future?  cool stuff lady
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-09-07 09:08 AM


Freedom is all about choice, my friend, may you forever maintain that freedom.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

MorningStar
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since 2009-10-26
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4 posted 2011-09-07 01:39 PM


It doesn't get any better than free...
This is wonderful Ms. E!

Aenea


JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-09-07 04:05 PM


Beautiful.
I think you have written a gem here.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern
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6 posted 2011-09-07 09:21 PM


When he finds you, he'll appreciate you and all you are... and are not. *S* And he'll consider himself a very lucky man!!
easy1
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7 posted 2011-09-08 04:28 AM


very interesting
ebonygirl
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8 posted 2011-09-08 11:24 PM


Thank you all for your time to read this poem, you are very kind to respond, my bday is coming.
Ms. E

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2011-09-10 01:14 AM


I believe that one must free themslves from the silly notions we cling to before we can find real love.
                                  Ida

ebonygirl
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10 posted 2011-09-11 05:06 PM


So true, Ida, Thank you,
Ms. E

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2011-09-11 09:12 PM


Wonderful...James
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