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Open Poetry #47

dawn in lady tree gown

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-09-06 08:00 AM

you were dawn in a lady tree gown
your long legged horizon stepped wide
and at the brim of my mountain mouth
and you were the moist hovering of clouds

you danced within that distance of evening
and your belly well was deep musical sounds
I knew the curve of your breast sighing
as pink ended whispers swallowed my eyes

you spoke of that space between heaven and sky
always leaving just enough room for a better fit
and you knew I would always adjust my intentions
to fill into that void, from without and within

and my beard would be forested in a witness mist

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-06-2011 09:55 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-06 11:40 AM

Spellbinding "dawn in lady tree gown", packed with fantastic imagery and filled with emotions that flow in absolutely unique D-accords.

You are a musician with words.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-09-06 02:27 PM

Ms mar, you always bring sweet blessings to me here. Thank you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-09-07 08:35 PM

you spoke of that space between heaven and sky
always leaving just enough room for a better fit
and you knew I would always adjust my intentions
to fill into that void, from without and within

There is an almost-reverence to these lines that's so beautiful! *S*

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