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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2011-09-04 06:18 PM


     Shimmer-frost Moon

A shimmer-frost moon          
gleams through
ragged clouds and
the whispering rain
of falling leaves
in this twilight Autumn
  forest breeze
to settle in reflected
splendor on the deep,
cold lake of blissful
  serenity.
Be silent and listen
with calm mind and clear
  heart
to the quiet voice of wisdom
in all transience and change
down the ever-rolling seasons.

                --- b. e. adams (9/4/2011)

© Copyright 2011 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2011-09-04 06:23 PM


"Be silent and listen
with calm mind and clear
  heart"

Nice write.
Healthy dose of wisdom in this line.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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2 posted 2011-09-04 06:33 PM


Dear 2ndreampoet,
JL took my favorite quote.
Thank you for the wisdom of love you gave in your poem.
Ms.E

OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-09-04 07:00 PM


Bruce, I wrapped myself in your Lamartine voice and imbibed the serenity of your beloved lake and its surroundings and its microcosmic significance in the macrocosm of time and place.  

Owl

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2011-09-05 03:23 AM


What wonderful thoughts to meditate on, Bruce. So calm and serene.
                                Ida

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-09-05 03:51 AM


... you made me feel as if I beheld a sacred scenery and I am tiptoeing silently into it to be part of it.

Most excellent.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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6 posted 2011-09-05 04:48 PM


Be silent and listen
with calm mind and clear
  heart

This is so beautiful!

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2011-09-09 06:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
katahdin
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8 posted 2011-09-09 10:10 PM


Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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