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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-09-02 06:46 PM



Solar plexus shrapnel
exploding old emotions
post traumatic tourniquet

LGR(C)9/2/11

  

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-09-02 11:47 PM


I understand it if no on else does.
faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-09-03 12:46 PM


good one, Lori..i enjoyed it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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3 posted 2011-09-03 01:03 AM


Most interesting, Lori.
                  Ida

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2011-09-03 01:04 AM


Most interesting, Lori.
                  Ida

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-09-03 05:27 AM


Everything happens right there indeed, in our solar plexus, all of our emotions are felt so strongly there.

Impressive!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-09-03 07:58 AM


Jerry, I'm so glad you do understand. I was going out on a limb here. thanks for being here for me.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-09-03 07:59 AM


Faith, thanks for the read! glad it made sense to you too.
Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2011-09-03 08:03 AM


Ida, thanks for the read.
________________________________________
Margherita bless your heart for your kind words


Lori

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9 posted 2011-09-03 06:12 PM


They do lie waiting, don't they? And they sure are destructive!!! Great write!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2011-09-03 06:26 PM


Suthern-and how
Lori

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11 posted 2011-09-05 01:28 AM


Nothing like a good old fashioned emotional ambush.  Good writing, Lori.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2011-09-05 08:56 AM


Thanks Alison xoxox
Lori

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13 posted 2011-09-05 11:23 PM


Like a lightening bolt/
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

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14 posted 2011-09-10 10:26 AM



love's shattered shards slice

unexpected memories

old scars bleed anew





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15 posted 2011-09-10 03:45 PM


Quiet explosions
Disappointment is silenced
Heart mends in quiet

~*~

I love it when you inspire others!

JL
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16 posted 2011-09-10 05:11 PM


Excellent write.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

flash
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17 posted 2011-09-10 07:22 PM


Lori: Powerful stuff--good to explode the old emotions and make way for the new--even if--during the explosion--you are injured-injuries will heal--but a heart filled with old pain never will.

Enjoyed the read!

flash

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