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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2011-08-31 08:01 AM


I recognized the addiction you carried
and where the ache was resting, restless
your eyes were not shy looking down
as if you could just take it from me
without even asking my permission

you said I was vulgar in my actions
but you smiled as I moved it around
and you said how it curved upward
like it wanted to be inside you
made you wish there was another also

and the cream filled round too
how your fingers wanted to gather
one in each hand and just devour
letting everything run down slow
til your breasts were wearing residue

I asked if you wanted something extra
as I drizzled honey lengthwise and around
you called me names and leaned low
your mouth was a demon panting then
and your tongue spoke of sinful things

when I pushed it close to your eyes
and whispered into your naked ear
how it was more than you could swallow
but if you did I could do it again
just like this one,  banana split special

double vanilla with butterscotch and honey

___________

daark  (doing volunteer work at DQ has it's rewards...)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-31-2011 08:39 AM).]

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bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

1 posted 2011-08-31 09:13 AM


god, I love icecream ~
delicious...daddy~

             

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2011-08-31 10:00 AM


Banana split ... mmmmmm .... a favorite. One serving for two ... the only outcome I can imagine is the melting

An enticing poem like yours certainly adds to the increase in temperature.


Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2011-08-31 10:18 AM


Babybel1e, thanks babe.

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Ms mar, thank you lady friend


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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4 posted 2011-08-31 01:50 PM


Oh man, and my question could be
so obviously over the top that
this would be sent elsewhere!!




Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-08-31 02:17 PM


Sweetsinsun hmmmmm thanks I think.
luminosity
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6 posted 2011-08-31 02:34 PM


great twist.....good writing enjoyed even though I never liked banana splits
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-08-31 02:39 PM


Luminosity, thanks for the eyes here


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