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Open Poetry #47

Simply Magnificent

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-08-29 12:59 PM

Simply Magnificent

Paris,
its so magnificent;
its ambience
its fine restaurants,
its lively cafe's,
the parks & museum's,
the night life
so lucious
and full of life,
but more than that
the best part of Paris
is being here with you,
you are scrumptous,
you are delicious,
you and Paris
are simply
magnificent.

JamesLee
27August
2011

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-08-29 09:34 AM

Lovely write from Paris, where your romantic nature experiences a new high.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-08-29 10:48 AM

Paris? Paris, Texas? Hah! Just kidding. Nice wording about a city that has been written about forever, but actually the poem wasn't really about Paris, huh?

~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2011-08-29 12:01 PM

very nicely done...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-08-29 01:15 PM

Yeah, been to Paris, Texas many times...Paris, France...with you this time, my friend...and enjoyable was the trip...

j.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-08-29 01:46 PM

James Lee,

This is a great write.
Enjoyed.

JL

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