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Open Poetry #47

So Deep is Your Reach

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-27 11:54 AM

You may have your suspicions
hopes dreams and convictions
about the ways your words
may effect or direct me

What ever you may think
into my heart they deeply sink
moving me beyond speech
so deep is your reach

I wrestle for a reply
searching this blue sky
for that white dove
bearing you my love

LGR(C)8/27/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-08-27 01:09 PM

Someone has given you pause to read their words and be impressed. That, then, is what we all secretly cherish, that someone such as you, Lori, will feel within as they read our efforts.

~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2011-08-27 01:33 PM

And I remember that once,
you wrote only for your family,
never dreaming just where your
words would ever land outside
of their ken.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-08-27 02:31 PM

"Into my heart they deeply sink"
Beautiful the way you formed this.
Thank you Lori,
Ms. E

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-08-27 07:14 PM

moving me beyond speech

That's what happens when words are drenched in love and beauty. Emotions so deep ...

Beautiful, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2011-08-27 10:08 PM

What a wonderful way to express it. Very well done, my friend.

j.

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