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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2011-08-27 08:03 AM




opening presents like it is a holiday
and you gift wrapped everything you wanted stolen
then left it under the tree of me
so you could look up to my eyes you said
and watch everything happen slow motion

you said hurting felt better than not
and you needed me to make grooves there
inside around your heart place grounds
so you could find your way back often
when your fingers were searching for love

there was a river within your wound
you said it broke open so long ago
and you never got it fixed the right way
only little handfuls of patching here and there
but the core of you was never really completed

you said you would be good again later
and would I fold your white dress neatly
and place it by your whole me and roll me shoes
there in that big box on the altar
and would I mind setting them on fire

using just the friction we had so easily between us


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daark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-08-27 03:15 PM


This is so very intimate.

Heavy sigh.

Lucky words surrounding this song.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2011-08-27 03:43 PM


a little dance of essential trust...

I'm more inclined to resign to seasalt baths and Mozart these days, purity doesn't burn so much since I've learned to leave the scars alone.




Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2011-08-28 07:39 AM


sweetsun, thank you babe


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ms serene...scars are trophies but they are not worth having if you have to keep polishing them eh?  Thanks lady

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-08-28 01:37 PM


Spellbinding, dramatically intense, passionately wild, exuding sensitive sensuousness (!) and yet making everything appear so NATURAL.

Master brushes here too.

Love,
M


ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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5 posted 2011-08-28 06:55 PM


Dark's writes touch me inside,
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-08-29 08:03 AM


ms mar, thank you special lady friend.

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ms ebony, thank you for letting the pen enter there

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