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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2011-08-25 06:34 PM


I sleep with one eye open and one foot upon the floor.
Seven bullets for my gun--the extra is the silver one
etched with my own name, insured--
for repercussion's sake, I've saved
a ticket outta here--let's pray:

I'll have no need for eight.

© Copyright 2011 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-08-25 06:38 PM


Taking it as it comes, take 'em all out before you come the the silver lining, I'm packing the eighth one.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-08-25 06:48 PM


Intense, serenity blaze,
but understood,
Ms. E

OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-08-25 07:32 PM


I sure hope and pray you have no need for any of them - especially no need for the eighth, Karen.

Owl

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2011-08-25 09:58 PM


Jerry, Ms. E., and my dearest Owl, I thank you much.

My love to you all for reading and commenting.


Margherita
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5 posted 2011-08-26 03:09 AM


As long as you write, WE can relax, I guess!

(((((Karen)))))


Love,
Margherita

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2011-08-26 03:28 AM


Leave the bullet in the gun, just let the ink keep flowing from your pen
Liz

Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2011-08-26 09:00 AM


Karen...Maybe you should think about taking your meds real soon. LOL.

quote: "Lets pray I'll have no need for eight"

Great ending. Really enjoyed.
Hope you don't take my statement about meds serriously...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Sunshine
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8 posted 2011-08-26 09:51 AM


I like what Margherita said...




JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-08-29 12:45 PM


Nice...James
suthern
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10 posted 2011-08-31 08:23 PM


for repercussion's sake, I've saved
a ticket outta here

Gotta love a gal who's prepared for whatever comes her way. *G*

But you bet I'll pray... I hope the only weapon you'll ever need is your pen. *S*

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