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Silent Clouds. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Drawing silence down on wings of indigo black, night descends upon hearts, dreaming delights,drenched by autumn sunshine to come. As gold, leaf and love remain eternal,third season bellows flame hues, smouldering through long winter nights,cold carpets clean with snow, union confirmed. Facing fresh future winds, like clouds flying free. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite poem, dear Phil, the seasons seem to merge so beautifully like in a watercolor painting! Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Facing fresh future winds, like clouds flying free." Nice close! Excellent write. JL  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY fine writing !! [a joy to read] |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Wonderful Silent Clouds, enjoyed your poem Goldenrose, ebonygirl |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
loved this, glad that autumn heralds your most welcome return. naturegirl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
As gold, leaf and love remain eternal,third season bellows flame hues, smouldering through long winter nights, beautiful lines, fine writing.  "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I really like this. It's one of the best autumn poems that I have read. Alison |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You give me hope this heat will end and other seasons will come. *S* Beautiful work! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A beautiful, seasonal poem. I enjoyed reading this preamble of things to shortly come. Come read to me some poem, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Often I wonder if two clouds were tied together, would they circle endlessly through time. Nice write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice to see you writing again, Phil, Always enjoy your lovely poetry. Ida |
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