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Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04
Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

0 posted 2011-08-24 06:26 PM



Can I ask you something? ...
Promise me it's okay to ask you something?
Tell me it won't jepordize our frineship?
Tell me that it won't upset you if I ask ...
That you won't think any less of me,
that you won't reject me if I tell you?
If I tell you what I really want ...
That it won't ruin our relationship ...
Please tell me the truth ...
Would it be okay if we could ...
if we ... can we ...


  As I read, as I stroke your poem,
you Rock me!
you MOAN me!
you Send me in rolling, swelling tidal waves
of raw delight and primal pleasure,
in spasms of ultimate expression
to the Land where fantasy is Real
to the place where love incarnate lives eternal ...

again! ...
AGagain!! .....
And yet AGAIN!!!!!! ...
Then hold me as we drift,
down ... down ... down,
our bodies shuddering,
to the petty world of clocks and papers.
Knowing we are STILL
the very best and closest friends!

Jaime


    



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katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-08-24 07:34 PM


WOW!! That's about all I can say!
Kat >^..^<

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-08-24 07:57 PM


Ditto that!
Lori

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