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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2011-08-24 10:00 AM


On graduating law school two
Wong brothers set up shop
Their business flourished to the point
where they both worked non stop

They hired Jeffery Doan to help
with their increased work load
Soon followed by Chris Mayka, folks
a graduate of Rhodes

Yet still they labored long and hard
and late into the night
So added one more to the firm
Antoine Cornelius Wright

They hit the big time right away
and still their business grows
And, though this pains me much to say,
'cause everybody knows

If you don't want to work all day
and then still work all night
Don't choose your partners as they did,
Two Wongs, Doan, Mayka, Wright

© Copyright 2011 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2011-08-24 12:57 PM


hahahahaahaha...you're killing me. Lovin' it
Lori

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
2 posted 2011-08-24 01:43 PM


Lori,
Thanks, lol, yup, got some real hard pore corn goin' on here.
Doc

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-08-25 01:17 PM


That is so funny.
Had me hooked for a different outcome, what, I'm not sure.  That ending was one of those burst out laughing grabs.
Enjoyed!

JL


Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06
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4 posted 2011-08-25 01:21 PM


Something tells me that last line is going to catch on and we haven't seen the last of it. Very clever write Dr. Moose.

Marcia
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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
5 posted 2011-08-26 06:44 AM


JL,
Thanks, that's what make writing this silly stuff worthwhile.
Doc

Marcia,
Thank you, I'm really trying to recapture the "Mr. Peabody" experience here. I guess that makes me old, dang, but life was a heck of a lot simpler then.
Doc

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