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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-08-22 06:52 PM

TURN AGAIN
22 August 2011

Brimful of sigh-wonder,
eyes stroke the birth-colours of the morning,
exploding the sparkle in the shimmer-windows
into the music of virgin laughter, laughter, laughter,

and like a unicorn
prancing
at the gates of peace,
or a vixen protecting her young,
or an albatross winging the wide ocean sky,

the day bursts into bloom.

Owl

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-08-22 08:15 PM

“eyes stroke the birth-colours of the morning,
exploding the sparkle in the shimmer-windows”

“an albatross winging the wide ocean sky,
the day bursts into bloom.”

Love these lines.

Very nice write - and morning story.

JL

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-08-22 08:36 PM

Thank you, JL. I am glad you enjoyed it so much.

Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-08-26 03:46 PM

Brimful of sigh-wonder,

That's what your poems are, dear lady!

I enjoyed this very much!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-08-26 03:53 PM

I am glad this was brought up again, I had read it before, but could not reply in that moment.

Spectacular!

Love,
Margherita

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-08-26 09:56 PM

Love the way you picture the day.
Ms. E

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-08-27 09:29 AM

Thank you, Ruth. Again, a wonderful, heart-warming thing to say.

Thank you, Margherita. I am glad too, for I always enjoy your replies immensely. Smiles.

Thank you, eg.

Owl

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-08-29 01:27 AM

Beautiful and original expression of the day's birth. You are incredible too, you know that?

xoxoxo
A

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-08-29 12:52 PM

Thank you, Alison, for your tremendous support and appreciation!

Owl

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