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the edge of Fall
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the edge of Fall |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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the edge of Fall Endless verdant-forest hills rise beyond a flawless lake to greet blue-sky cloud legions marching forever in cadent harmony with the soft-shadow sunbeams and memories, that dance this pathless forest dream, of life and love and Summer passing beyond the lovely edge of Fall. --- b. e. adams (8/20/2011) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How delicately you paint the coming transition into Fall. Just a tiny melancholic hint, yet still immersed in the Summer dream. Absolutely beautiful, dear Bruce. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You always do fall so well. Bruce. I wait for your poems about autumn and I am never disappointed. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bruce, I so especially enjoy your poems about your hills and lake. This poem, like the others, paints the scene so clearly, that I would recognise it, if, as an owl, I were to fly over it. Beautiful! Owl |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful is the Fall Season and the way you paint it, Enjoyed, Ms.E |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
"with the soft-shadow sunbeams and memories, that dance this pathless forest dream" beautiful lines, fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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