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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-08-19 10:49 AM


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I’ve never
Gotten over you

Each morning
I see you there
And wonder how
It could be possible
Someone obviously
Cares for me though
I don’t know why

I have an impression
You are a guardian
Sent to protect me
In times like these
Against my lesser I

So here I am
For all my sins
Singing my little songs
For you

Just to feel you smile


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© Copyright 2011 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-08-19 10:59 AM


I think this is the most beautiful, most giving love poem I have ever read.  

I am glad you have her to warm your heart.

A most apt title - not because of who you are, but because of the concept of the poem.

Owl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-08-19 11:52 AM


I connect with this.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-08-19 02:14 PM


Enchanting, Kudos to you and the lady who inspired this.
                               Ida

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
4 posted 2011-08-19 03:44 PM


So lovely... and loving.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2011-08-19 06:22 PM


Beautiful feelings including humbleness, so powerfully and lovingly expressed.

M

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