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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-18 10:01 AM



slender trees cast shadows along the brim of your gaze
I admire them touching your glances as if they were poetry
being penned by a lack of sound...that music of silence

a morning sun was light rain earlier when you woke
whispering down across your charms with long fingers
touching just the brim of your pores without entering

you touched your lips to finger tips as if to keep a secret
but left an unissued kiss there instead of word sounds
and then a smile was born, slowly birthing, struggling

freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter

__________

daark


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ebonygirl
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1 posted 2011-08-18 12:12 PM


"... that music of silence"
Sometimes that music can be heard
by the poem in your eyes.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-18 12:38 PM


ms E...thank you for peeking into this window
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3 posted 2011-08-18 03:30 PM


This touches foggy places
with its Spanish Mossy ways, D.




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4 posted 2011-08-19 03:02 PM


Every line pushed this farther into my "favorites" category! *S* I love this, DS!
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-08-19 03:58 PM


Sweetsun

Hmmmmm can see your lady tree wearing that. Thanks babe


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6 posted 2011-08-20 06:46 AM


slender trees cast shadows along the brim of your gaze
I admire them touching your glances as if they were poetry
being penned by a lack of sound...that music of silence

a morning sun was light rain earlier when you woke
whispering down across your charms with long fingers
touching just the brim of your pores without entering

you touched your lips to finger tips as if to keep a secret
but left an unissued kiss there instead of word sounds
and then a smile was born, slowly birthing, struggling

freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter


Whoever inspired this stunning poem brings out the best of you. I agree with Ruth.

Every word a pearl, every line a row of pearls ... in its entirety it shines in poignant light.

Love,
M

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-08-20 07:22 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend for the review and sigh song


Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2011-08-22 03:42 AM


freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter


Like a freedom flyer ,,,,,,

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-08-22 07:22 AM


ms king...thanks ms
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