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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Listing There is this list upon my wall Of all I need to do. I try to follow, order-wise But thoughts interrupt the view. My mind, it wanders off the course Engineering the day's interfere When the only words and deeds of want Are to know that you are near. Wondering why these events occur Without a soothe of touch. Without reflecting the missing of The fading to gray of such. Use to this, I'm getting now No hints, just clouds of reign. There is this list upon my wall Its completion to now attain. Each new of day returns these thoughts Held only within a heart. Acceptance of a season's end Unfinished, list to start. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How good for us that you decided to give the creation of this poignantly beautiful poem the priority of your list, dear Maureen. First comes love, always, even when its implications are melancholic. Your heart knows that the nearness is real. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed reading your poem, Ms. E |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Life is challenging at best, so I'm learning to just let it be and let live. Always enjoy pondering your nakdthoughts, M~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was nodding my head in agreement from the first verse... and didn't stop. *S* The mundane might fill the list... but our thoughts slip away to the magical. I like this very much! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I, too, have such lists - on my wall, in the garage, on my computer, and find managing them is magical. Of course I'm the worst magician ever! Magic is when daily things like going to the bathroom, eating, and such, happens like it's supposed to. My list get thrown away - a new one takes it's place and every once in a while I find spam on one of them, a line drawn directly through the center of an item... Then I have to throw that list away because somebody messed it up ... it's now out of order... cool piece my friend. j. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have trouble concentrating enough to write a list. My mind is flitting all over the place. I like this, Maureen. Alison |
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