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Open Poetry #47

What the hear knows

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-08-13 09:01 PM

Mysteriously, while I wait for you,

  a shiver runs down my spine.

Racing back up, can it be true?

  I can't believe that you are mine.

Looking at you, while you haunt my mind,

  your beauty is so absolute.

Never would I have thought of such a find,

  life, now, is no longer destitute.

Often you fill my sub conscience with dreams,

  visions actually, of beauty and compassion;

exercising the demons and the screams,

  slowly bringing me peace and distraction.

My soul has been healed, heart cast anew,

  evidence that I, truly do love you, too.

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

1 posted 2011-08-14 07:22 PM

What the heart knows

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2011-08-15 09:40 AM

You melt me with your love words. I can not critique your work when they are written to my heart.

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