To--my Masked Dance Partner

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Open Poetry #47

To--my Masked Dance Partner

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2011-08-12 01:12 AM

Stealing my breath
in our twilight dance
enamored by your enigmatic light,
I've met you twice
and yet can't remember your face

Perhaps
the soundtrack in my head
drowned out your name

Or, maybe,
just maybe,
you caught me by surprise

Either way
our collisions were a sight to behold
because at the end of the day
your car met me
on the blacktop dance floor

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2011-08-12 08:22 AM

interesting dance....cool prospective..

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-08-12 03:07 PM

. . . and what better way to meet, is what I'm talkin' about . . . Put your feet to the metal and get it on . . . Gotta love it.

~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-08-12 03:49 PM

Nice write. Did you ever unmask?
Just wondering...

JL

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-08-24 10:14 PM

Cool beans, like your title too.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-08-25 02:57 PM

Enjoyed your poem Shadow,
Ms. E

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-08-31 07:18 PM

Enchanting!

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