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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2011-08-11 10:43 PM


Your heart only goes so far 
But sometimes ones throat slows down
Just as the wind blows 

There is no time until we are gone
No ease of sorrows 
It is here and now 
Shadows amongst the candid souls

You see a hat weaving in the air
A terrace that yearns for it's wooden scrolls to be touched by the warmth of a hand 

These are the widows of our eyes
That wander for far too long,
Until a long Sunday turns into a Monday dawn



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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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1 posted 2011-08-16 06:32 PM


Enjoyed your poem Tomer.
Ms. E

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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2 posted 2011-08-17 12:28 PM


Thanks, Ms. E..take care

Cheers

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-08-20 05:56 PM


"These are the widows of our eyes
That wander for far too long,
Until a long Sunday turns into a Monday dawn"


Nice!

JL


Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
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4 posted 2011-08-21 02:36 AM


JL, happy you enjoyed the stanza.  Hope all is well

Cheers

Tomer

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