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Open Poetry #47

Two and yet One

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-08-11 08:22 PM

Two and yet One

So early to get started
So young to be two
who failed
who was true,
Two and yet One.

First one city
then another
Adventure takes over,
Two and yet One

Love flowing from
your veins
Love lasting forever
however in vane,
Two and yet One.

Man makes a choice
never thinking
of His voice
Believe and wait,
Two and yet one.

His blessing upon your fruit
His timing not your own
Listen carefully
do not miss the bliss
yet to come,
Two and yet one.

E.M.L. 7-2-00

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-08-11 08:51 PM

You took on the time(mis)honored heartache and break of two and yet one, ebonygirl, if I am reading this very well-written poem correctly. I think I am. When I read these poems that point fingers at two and yet one I cringe, because of my misconduct through the years to make two and yet one happen. At least I have learned to face up to who I was then and who I am now.

~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-08-12 08:11 AM

ms E,,,,enjoyed this prayful suggestion,,

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2011-08-13 05:07 AM

interesting !!

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