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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-10 07:49 AM


I would write deeply into your eyes
if they were green gifts sighing
glancing their dances at brim of dawn

and if your breasts were shadows there
filling my palms with fortune
reading my lines of passion out loud slowly

I would write deeply into your eyes
if they were closed tight pretending
to sleep through our love music songs

and if your thighs were wearing my tattoos
sanding them smooth with undulations
then gripping me into the gate of your heaven

and I would writhe deeply into your eyes then

__________

daark (forbidden series)



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-08-10 08:41 AM


Pretend, and write away!

Smiling here


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-10 08:42 AM


sweetsun...did you say write or writhe?  thanks babe
Sunshine
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3 posted 2011-08-10 08:56 AM


Yep.


ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-08-10 12:08 PM


Nice poem to wake from,
Ms. e

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5 posted 2011-08-10 12:59 PM


Ms E and you asked where were my eyes as you smiled and covered them with sigh fingers. Thanks ms E


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6 posted 2011-08-10 03:05 PM


I am a complete sucker for beautiful eyes. *G*
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-08-10 03:08 PM


Ms suthern. Mine are both glass, but they are purdy. Thanks lady.
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8 posted 2011-08-10 11:50 PM


You writhe so well it's almost like I can see you through my finger tips.  Glass eyes are wonderful mirrors in your mind.

Ali-san

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9 posted 2011-08-11 06:25 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe!!
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