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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-09 06:42 AM


I should never speak of the memory tree gardens
how they are as dancers of limb along edens brow
like centuries of sentries collecting there
the dust of used blessings kept for the savoring

nor would I speak of those forgotten leaves
those moments left untouched and unturned
scattered as ashes over mirrored ground
filling the endless void with their avoiding

I shall only speak of tomorrow in perhaps gowns
that drift from limb to most recent pyres
hesitation wafting as a cloud between harvesting
and the permanent emulsion of an eye blink

ah yes tomorrow, the hopeless, romantically hopeful

_____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-09-2011 07:49 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-08-09 08:37 AM


Tomorrows are where
all unspoken words
await romantics...



there's a whole lot of
pretty in this one...


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-09 08:39 AM


sweetsun...thanks babe...was hoping it would be visible to some...
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2011-08-09 10:18 AM


When you write like this?

I just want to...eat you.


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-08-09 10:22 AM


Mmmm damn bomb. I am so skinny all you would get is bone. Thanks babe.
Martie
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5 posted 2011-08-09 11:10 AM


That sensitive side of yours is so darn good looking!!
ebonygirl
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6 posted 2011-08-09 12:06 PM


"Calming trees... romantic tomorrows",
Enjoyed,
Ms. e

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-08-09 12:29 PM


ms martie, thank you special neighbor..

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ms ebony..thank you for the glances ms

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8 posted 2011-08-09 02:45 PM


I shall only speak of tomorrow in perhaps gowns

This is one of those lines I get lost in and don't want directions out... Who needs food or drink when we have dreams? *S*

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-08-09 02:47 PM


Ms suthern

It is a magic place yes?  Thanks so much lady.


devina
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10 posted 2011-08-09 03:42 PM


ooooh...you just used the R-word!!! tsk-tsk...see what happens when I leave fer too long? I like the hopeful in this one DS!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-08-09 03:48 PM


Devina. Whoops my bad. Thanks for the eyes and welcome back.

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