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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-08-07 07:42 PM



He said Wednesday he'd be heading home
He might not make it before midnight
but I won't be spending the night alone
Things have gone well and my heart is  light
the past few days have flown
Waiting is a struggle and a fight
against the impatience for which I'm known
And though he has been out of touch and sight
he calls me often on the phone
The sound of his voice puts things right
His whispers make me moan
with delight
Our love is solid as a stone
that we hold on to good and tight

LGR(C)8/7/11

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1 posted 2011-08-07 07:46 PM


Home again, home again, jiggity jig...



make him squeal....


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-08-07 08:01 PM


When I'm done with him he'll be unconscious
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2011-08-07 09:33 PM


Reminds me of the song, "Anticipation is making me wait"  

Hmmmm great stuff....including the replies.  

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-08-07 11:08 PM


Blues, they ruined that song for me... ketchup is all I see...but I hear ya... thanks!
Lori

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5 posted 2011-08-08 02:41 PM


Wheeeeee!
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6 posted 2011-08-08 04:02 PM


I'm loving what I'm reading here, Lori. Tonight the stars will come out in large numbers for you, and I am glad.

~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-08-08 05:24 PM


Ditto that Michael!
__________________________________________
Thanks Jerry I appreciate you being here

Lori

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8 posted 2011-08-08 06:14 PM


"Unconscious" is a good thing, Ms. Lori,
ebonygirl

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9 posted 2011-08-08 06:23 PM


I really love this Lori, so tender and loving
(h)
Jaime Goose

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2011-08-08 07:16 PM


Ebonygirl is is a VERY good thing
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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11 posted 2011-08-08 07:18 PM


Thanks Jaime, it means alot coming from you.
xo Lori

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