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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-08-06 07:06 PM


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Rest easy young men
There’s no duty scheduled
For a long time

Eventually we’ll all
Find out what’s going to happen
And the word will get passed on
Down the line

If there are dreams
Let them take you home
As you would have it on return

In our gloaming hours  
There are now
A few more special stars
Shining in the sky


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-08-06 07:12 PM


Amen!!  Thank you for this~
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2011-08-06 07:48 PM


lovely poem

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2011-08-06 11:41 PM


Nice, my friend...

j.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
4 posted 2011-08-06 11:49 PM


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Thank you

And the rest is silence . . .


John


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