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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-05 11:18 PM

Gentle cravings
that take us unaware
They guide our steps
and direct our stare
Forever trying to feed
that subtle and irresistible
insatiable need
for more
Bewitched we seek
to find that fix
that leaves us weak
and makes us tic
Those tender addictions
we can't ignore.

LGR(C)8/5/11

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-08-06 11:04 AM

“Forever trying to feed
that subtle and irresistible
insatiable need
for more”

Isn’t that the truth?
Excellent write Lori.

JL

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-08-06 11:08 AM

Thanks JL...it is truer for some than others...
Lori

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-08-06 01:56 PM

Aw wow, this is a tender hearted kind of desire.

How perfectly glorious it is.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-08-06 05:01 PM

I like this one a lot.
ebonygirl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-08-06 06:38 PM

Thanks Blues I appreciate the read and comments
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Glad you like it too Ms.E
Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-10-12 09:53 PM

Don't know where I was the day you posted this, Lori, but I'm here now. You called the passion play as it is, gentle cravings which build into volcanic explosions.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-10-13 06:34 AM

You were off being maudlin (wink)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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8 posted 2011-10-13 01:44 PM

Now this is good... I can hear the spirit crying "more!" Indeed, it's those tender addictions that seem to drive us. Lovely writing.
Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-10-13 01:59 PM

Michael, I've not told you much your comments mean to me as I respect your work so much...thanks for the kind words

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