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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-05 11:35 AM



perhaps there were those special occasions
when my mind was breasted down to visualize
and torn away from the jade of your glances
wishing they were jaded with cravings remaining

those flickering moments in time of pink ink
when your shoes were hidden in the corner
and you were dancing on tiptoes of tempting
so you had to lean againt the tree of me

and yes my mind went there like it was male
being sent sensual delivery, partial post
oh hell, ok all the way upright and standing
leading me around like a handle in your hands

that you said wouldn't hurt unless I wanted to
move all of your lady like places around again
and make you lose your place in our poetry
like counting freckles when your back is turned

then facing me with your insurmountable numbers

_____________

daark


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ebonygirl
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1 posted 2011-08-05 06:11 PM


Smiling softly,
Ms.E

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-05 06:30 PM


Ms E
cravings for something green
in glance dancing.

Thank you ms


BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2011-08-05 07:34 PM


and yes my mind went there like it was male
being sent sensual delivery, partial post
oh hell, ok all the way upright and standing
leading me around like a handle in your hands

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
rotflmao!!! I am so smiling at you, it's all so good and fine.

Only you, dark dude!!


Martie
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4 posted 2011-08-05 07:42 PM


There needs to be a post office with your name on it...or is there already?
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-08-06 07:43 AM


babyblue...oh damn...I think she knows me..and I adore your eyes looking at how my pen erects sometimes...thanks babe

_____________

ms martie, smiling here at my neighbor...I understand my photo is posted at the post office in some places..does that count?  thanks lady.

Sunshine
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6 posted 2011-08-06 10:33 AM


I believe I enjoyed the responses
just as  much as the poetry...

as you say,

it's all good.




Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-08-06 11:18 AM


Sweet sun you water me with a smile. Thanks lady.
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