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Two Candles
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Two Candles |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. No one is looking No one is paying attention We are free to be as we are Ice glistens on leafless branches Like fine crystal beneath the light Of a round silver moon A small cloud passes overhead We’ll make of this world as we would Sketching ourselves into the scenes Who’s to say I do not see Love beauty hope worthy eternity Come to spend a little time with me Snow slowly dancing Around your hair . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is exactly what I needed...even though it's cooled down today [and we received rain, too!!], this was a beautiful harbinger of the whiter side of winter that we have to look forward to. Lovely! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: nice -Juju |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Nice poem Huan Yi, ebonygirl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love the way you have combined the beauty of winter with spirit of romance. Lovely. Ida |
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