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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Rare Rare it is to spy Two red-tail hawks sitting near Just two posts apart ~*~ Rare it is to watch Red-feathered head eyeing me Drained feeders await ~*~ Rare it is to sense Need from a shy creature’s eyes Relying on you ~*~ Rare it is to see Speeding tires brake up sharp Untimely death – not ~*~ Rare it is to hear Heartbeats of true affection Until it was yours ~*~ © KRJ 8-3-11 |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just beautiful! Enjoyed very much! Kat >^..^< |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tis not rare for me, fair lady I guess I've grown accustomed to the goings-on in every day here though fine writing |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Well penned |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweet sun....rare is always more tasty than well done....you are rare lady!! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Beautiful lines, I just can’t pick one of my favorites from these cos all are so very true and well written. Applause! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Couldn’t be more picturesque. Very nice write, and snapshot in a "rare" time. JL  |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Too many of us run through our days failing to appreciate the rarities in life. I'm glad you're not one of those people. Beautiful, as always. Michael |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful, you! Each one so vivid and true! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...these are lovely! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice work, sunshine, putting the spotlight on the wildlife of America and the fact that we, as humans, owe certain ones a handout or they will starve. ~ Man who fish in other man's well often catch crabs. ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So very pleased that you all got a little something out of these actual happenings.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I entertain myself on the long trips to Louisiana looking for hawks... I've stopped and photographed a few... but none of the pictures compare with the beauty of this... beautiful work!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You shared the pictures with me. I love it. A |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..i enjoyed all of these..yes.. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
And rare it is that there is one to notice these wonderful gifts, that are really abundant, but rarely experienced. Beautiful poem. Thank you for being Karilea and thank you for bringing these exquisite moments to us. Owl |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Well done, Sunshine. Enjoyed your poem, ebonygirl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful combination of 5-7-5's Sunshine... miss you! good to be reading you again |
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