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tuffluv66
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since 2011-05-13
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0 posted 2011-08-03 07:29 PM


A spark of insanity is seated,

  solidly, within my beating chest.

Driving my thoughts of reality,

  remarkably, in the direction that I like best.

Reality is just a thought, a concept,

  that pertains to others, not me;

its a misconception of how you perceive the world,

  that you attempt to see.

In any given situation, reality is a flux,

  a thing that can be changed.

This at times will lead people to think,

  that you, truly, are deranged.

You must ascertain what your really want,

  then what you will attempt, to make it come true,

for reality is just a cloak of ambiguity,

  that you shape and mold around you.


© Copyright 2011 Allan Boettger - All Rights Reserved
ebonygirl
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1 posted 2011-08-03 07:35 PM


Enjoyed your poem,
ebonygirl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2011-08-03 07:46 PM


I like the way you think! Way cool!
Lori

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2011-08-04 06:49 PM


"You must ascertain what your really want, then what you will attempt, to make it come true, for reality is just a cloak of ambiguity, that you shape and mold around you."

Very thought provoking advise, tho somtimes what we want is not what we need and attempting to grasp the forbidden can lead to yet another cloak of unreality....there is great advise in this piece know that is well heeded!!!




~~~kingsangel~~~

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