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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
I feel, I see, I think, but still, I am not free there's tethers that bind me a past that won't let me be Complicated indispensable me with a future, finally that I can see Desires driving desperation Happiness choking agitation Wants and needs, I feel Happiness and love, I see I think that to be held by you is as free as I want to be |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
two thumbs up!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
thank you |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm amazed at how well your poems are echoing my own feelings...I can so relate! So of course I think this is great! Lori |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Love it..it is as free as I want to be as well. [This message has been edited by Marilyn (08-02-2011 10:20 AM).] |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
I try to imbue the things I write with all of me. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed reading your poem, tuffluv66. ebonygirl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice free style all the way down to the superb last line. ~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~ |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
ty all |
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