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tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-07-31 10:44 PM

I will always be in love with you.

I hope you understand its how I feel, I do.

If you promise to always love me that way

I will take you in wedlock forever and a day.

I hope you know it sets me free.

When you look up and smile at me.

You know you are the one my heart adores.

Its a matter settled between my heart and yours.

When I look at you, I know what you will say.

I will love you every night and day.

How we know that we will never part.

The amazing part is how we got our start.

No matter the reason, I will never go.

I have a life time to love you, so.

Even when you stop and demand.

I'll always be near and hold your hand.

You will never get me to say good bye.

No matter how hard you may try.

I love you so, with all my might.

So take me in your arms and hold me tight.

When you wait for me with your arms held wide.

I get a warm feeling deep down inside.

It leads us to finally entwine.

The way your soul calls to mine.

When you smile and look at me that way.

You lead my mind and body to stray.

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

1 posted 2011-07-31 10:44 PM

Once you read it from top to bottom, read it from bottom to top.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-07-31 10:48 PM

oh way cool!
Lori

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2011-07-31 10:51 PM

Either way...I love you too.

I do...forever and beyond..I do.

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

4 posted 2011-07-31 10:56 PM

First and last, always.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-08-01 06:05 AM

Enjoyed it Tiff.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2011-08-01 09:35 AM

Love can certainly turn one upside down, in and out, over and under. Very, very clever, poet!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

7 posted 2011-08-01 01:56 PM

I read it from bottom to top and from the bottom of my heart that is the coolest thing I have seen to date in poetry!!! You are blessed with a gift!!

"You will never get me to say good bye.

No matter how hard you may try.

I love you so, with all my might."

"The way your soul calls to mine.

When you smile and look at me that way.

You lead my mind and body to stray."

I have done enough of pushing people away to understand this verse, but somehow the soul never lets go and we find a way! Once again thank you for posting!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2011-08-01 05:19 PM

I applaud your creativity. Good write, either way.

Michael

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2011-08-05 11:17 AM

I enjoyed it thoroughly both ways... what a delightful write!

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