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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2011-07-31 09:22 PM


two of hearts
torn apart
rekindling what is left
the part that is me

been too long
to hang on
to all
the regrets
of what began
and ended
a total mess

so tucking the past
neatly away in it's place
I take out the teasures
that I saved
for a rainy day....



~~~kingsangel~~~

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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2011-07-31 09:45 PM


Perfect! That is what those treasures are for.
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2011-07-31 09:49 PM


Thank you for stopping by to read this I am trying to change the focus of my poetry I thought this was a good start....

~~~kingsangel~~~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2011-07-31 09:57 PM


'a total mess' ...

that about 'sums it all up' with respect to this double-post-modern
"Runaway American Dream" (not just attempts at 'relationships' therein) !

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2011-07-31 09:57 PM


I have not read any of your other poetry I am sorry to say. I will remedy that shortly. I have been away from the site for some time but I hope to have some time to read again in the future.
tuffluv66
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since 2011-05-13
Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.
5 posted 2011-07-31 10:01 PM


I like it. Its leading, but gives the reader a slightly different direction from any other.


Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
6 posted 2011-07-31 10:04 PM


secondhanddreampoet
      
     Thanks for reading and yes in this all for me instead me for all world this is the truth...

Marilyn,

     No worries but I will warn you some of it is not that good but I am open for suggestions on any of it! Take care and thanks for stopping by to read!!!


  

~~~kingsangel~~~

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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USA
7 posted 2011-07-31 10:22 PM


Tuff,
    Thank you for reading .... trying to redirect my direction at the moment glad you liked!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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