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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-07-31 12:28 PM





Meet me in my dreams
we'll find a full moon there
and we can lay together
under it's silver beams

Love me in the moonlight
caressing every seam
fulfilling  every dream
bringing me to my height

Make me call out in my sleep
my ecstasy and delight
Pulling your pillow tight
let me feel you way down deep


LGR(C)7/31/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-07-31 03:44 PM


Doesn't get any better than this, Lori. You are writing some beautiful poems these days. This is one of then,

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
2 posted 2011-07-31 05:07 PM


Nice dream Lori and nice poem.
ebonygirl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-07-31 06:08 PM


Thanks Jerry, I appreciate the input...Glad my whining on paper is palatable reading.
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Ebonygirl the same goes for you, I'm glad you are liking my stuff
Lori

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