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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-07-31 09:21 AM



C'mon and talk to me
I'll take the phone to bed
and you can pant pictures
in my head
I'll respond to you
like I always do...
You drive me crazy
with your heat
Give me that fever
that sweats my sweet
and sets me free
C'mon baby, talk to me

LGR(C)7/31/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2011-07-31 11:13 AM


This is why cell phones were invented - to protect the wired infrastructure of the country.
To prevent wiring from overheating, melting.

What they didn't see is the side affects of such calls ... millions are now using cell phones, particularly in Texas - all these calls (like yours) are heating the air causing record temperatures all over the state ... no, not global warming --- panting through cell phones....

Wonderful piece, my friend. Loved it.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-07-31 11:19 AM


Thanks Jimmy LOL!
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-07-31 03:46 PM


Yep, "and you can pant pictures." That says it all, my friend.

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
4 posted 2011-07-31 04:00 PM


loved the structure and the power of the image arthur
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2011-07-31 05:05 PM


Now we can skype. Maybe not
Loved it,
ebonygirl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2011-07-31 06:16 PM


Jerry, I'm so glad that read well, I was afraid everyone would think it was a typo. As always thank you for your kind words of support.
___________________________________________
Arthur, thanks for the tech support feed back...I'm pretty laid back about structure and stuff so I appreciate the comment
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Ebonygirl- Duh..um..skype?..lost me there lady.  (remember I'm old) Glad you liked it so much

Lori

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
7 posted 2011-07-31 07:21 PM


SOunds like a verse for a rock n roll song, Joan Jett or Pat Benatar....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
8 posted 2011-07-31 07:30 PM


Wow... thought I slipped into the cyb0r forum for a second.  Your point definately comes across, Lori.  Good write.
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