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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-07-31 09:02 AM



Isn't it funny how
at a different time and place
in my life
I would have been enjoying
the absence of my mate
The time and space
to myself
would have been a luxury
of serenity
free of strife
But now
with you
love has found
it's rightful place
I'm never in a hurry
to see you go
and when you're gone
time passes much too slow

LGR(C)7/31/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-07-31 03:42 PM


Yep. Now THIS is love, true love. I'm happy for you, Lori.

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
2 posted 2011-07-31 04:09 PM


simple and the better for it-i enjoyed it
Surely the purpose of writing is to communicate.Unless of course one is writing inorder to try and unravel ones' own thoughts

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
3 posted 2011-07-31 04:18 PM


Love, peace and tranquility,
that is love.
ebonygilr

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-07-31 06:20 PM


That makes me feel really good Jerry, thank you.
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Arthur you are on to something there. I think I do a little of both.
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Thanks Ebonygirl !

Lori

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