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easy1
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0 posted 2011-07-30 08:16 PM





From the shed




Snow draws the curtains.
Windows ice in fading light,
a cold night ahead.



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1 posted 2011-07-31 01:03 AM


Beautiful.  I understand cold weather poetry.  I live it.

A

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-07-31 04:38 PM


Burrr, put the kettle on.
Liked your poem, a gentle picture.
ebonygirl

Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2011-07-31 06:18 PM


sad.....y don't you go in from the shed and get warm?

~~~kingsangel~~~

easy1
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4 posted 2011-08-02 04:02 PM


Aye, there's the rub.

Thank you all for your kind comments.

Poets do not shoot fish in barrels, we woo them---and the barrels, too.

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