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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2011-07-30 05:19 AM


This one was posted in Spiritual Journeys but I wanted it in open as well... I am not sure if one will have to be removed or not.

The influence of the wooing...
and the folly of the youth...
the beginning of the ending
revealing of the truth

the treading and tripping
falling down and getting up
the anger and the rage
the pouring of the cups

the dynasty rising
castles crumbling to the ground
all is well that ends well
the second go around

the trumpeting of the angels
roaring thru the sky
the booming voice of justice
as another angel cries

the forgiveness of the wicked
the past has returned again
starving for salvation
and remembering when...

evil begets evil
until Jesus returns again....
~~~kingsangel~~~
[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (05-23-2010 01:00 PM).]




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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2011-07-30 06:24 AM


lovely work ms angel...but daddy devil ride a harley...
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2011-07-30 08:34 PM


Angel, this is quite powerful.  The references to Revelation are not lost on me.  Very good poem.

Michael

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2011-08-01 06:22 PM


Thank you stranger!!!! I have been that angel on the back a time or two trust me.... thnx for the reply!!!

Thank you Michael the reference to the bible is why it was originally in spiritual journeys, I am glad it wasn't lost on you!



~~~kingsangel~~~

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