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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2011-07-30 04:53 AM


turning the pages
in my mind
highlighting memories
that were not mine

the twisted tales
and games without rules
hanging up halos
in exchange for a noose

rewinding the future
fastforwarding the past
got me back where I started
and still out of gas

too much lost
in that tale to tell
as they watched
when my angel fell

back at the begining
I start again
wondering where
in the hell I have been....



~~~kingsangel~~~

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2011-07-30 06:25 AM


you never left....none of us ever do
we just roll over and look out another window

enjoyed it ms

Sunshine
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2 posted 2011-07-30 10:22 AM


Enjoyed the read, thank you!


Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2011-07-30 01:04 PM


Thank you Daark....but I am sure I am have a wandering soul here there and everywhere....

Sunshine....thanks for stopping by to read

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael
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4 posted 2011-07-30 01:42 PM


Sometimes where you've been isn't nearly as important as where you are going.  One might be considered wise who keeps those eyes facing forward.

I seem to recognize regret in this... and while it makes for beautiful poetry, it can be a poison to the soul.  Though the line,

"highlighting memories
that were not mine"

tells me I could be completely wrong in what I'm reading.  Enjoyed it either way.  

Michael



Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2011-07-30 01:45 PM


I know what poison feels like to the soul and you are closer than you think in your assumptions.....take care and thanks for reading....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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