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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2011-07-30 12:02 PM



Life
Life to live
Live to grow
Grow to learn
Learn to explore
Explore the world
World of challenge
Challenge your mind
Mind what you say
Say what you mean
Mean to be kind
Kind in heart
Heart and soul
Soul survivor
Survivor of heartbreak
Heartbreak of love
Love for the lost
Lost and forgotten
Forgotten by all
All are dying
Dying of life
Life

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1 posted 2011-07-30 12:11 PM


Extremely clever and well done, Kat!
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2011-07-30 12:30 PM


Thanks Deer! Glad you stopped by to check out my poem. Your comments are greatly welcomed.
Kat >^..^<

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3 posted 2011-07-30 12:44 PM


I agree.  Very clever and very well said.

Alison

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2011-07-30 01:24 AM


Thanks Alison!
Kat >^..^<

Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2011-07-30 04:20 AM


I like it alot ... I have writers block tonight....but I did get one out

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael
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6 posted 2011-07-30 02:32 PM


kat,

Very well done.  Creativity is a beautiful thing.

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7 posted 2011-07-30 02:41 PM


VERY well done!

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

The Shadow in Blue
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8 posted 2011-07-30 06:21 PM


Brilliant execution. I like it.
ebonygirl
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9 posted 2011-07-31 05:20 PM


Very cool poem,
ebonygirl

tuffluv66
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10 posted 2011-08-01 05:37 PM


I think..that it is indeed a beautifully written and executed poem. I really enjoyed it.
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11 posted 2011-08-02 12:36 PM


Very clerly done, katahdin.
                   Ida

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
12 posted 2011-08-03 08:59 PM


Thanks all!!
Kat >^..^<

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13 posted 2011-08-05 12:26 PM


Very creative! I really like this! *S*
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