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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2011-07-28 05:42 PM



A
sleepless night
brings thoughts unfair:
wordless pictures dangling there
to fuse the cons of
what may be:
dreamless meanings
endlessly.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Michael
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1 posted 2011-07-28 06:11 PM


You make insomnia seem beautiful.  I really enjoyed the flow of this.


Michael

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2011-07-28 06:40 PM


Thank you, Michael. Between the heat and the humidity, it's been hard to sleep lately... or maybe it's just age~~
M

Prasad Nataraj
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3 posted 2011-07-28 07:45 PM


Sleepless nights are terrible, true writing; they do bring thoughts that are unfair. Fine write.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-07-28 10:05 PM


I fought those sleepless nights for years. Finally have survived and now can sleep. Strange through you can have in the dead of the night when your eyes are wide open.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

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5 posted 2011-07-29 12:42 PM


Maureen,

I like this.

Alison

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6 posted 2011-07-29 03:15 AM


I think we have sleepless nights in common, Maureen. Nicely done.
                            Ida

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-07-29 04:03 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem, well done.
eboygirl

threadbear
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8 posted 2011-07-29 09:43 PM


Interesting write, Maur!
I thought I was the only one who couldn't sleep for all the unrestrained thoughts roaming in my head pre-sleep.
Stay cool,
Jeff

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9 posted 2011-07-29 11:43 PM


Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2011-07-30 03:42 AM


Dreamless meanings, interesting, the wheels in my head are turning already working on that phrase deciphering it's meaning, very cool....good poem

~~~kingsangel~~~

jwesley
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11 posted 2011-07-31 11:34 AM


We count the stars together, my friend, re-writing the trails they leave.
I read their flow in your words . . .
and finally, close my eyes...

j.

JL
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12 posted 2011-08-02 02:38 PM


Ditto!  I have the cap, and T-shirt…
Love the depth of simplicity.

JL


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13 posted 2011-08-05 02:25 PM


I don't think I'd complain so much about sleepless nights if mine brought beauty like this. *S*
nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2011-08-16 07:56 AM


Thank you, all.

Between the economy, the past, the future...the present  is so overwhelming sometimes and I am just not feeling as rested as I should after supposedly a night's sleep.

You are all appreciated!

M

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15 posted 2011-08-16 10:14 PM


Darling girl,
I'm sincerely sorry
that my dreams jumped
several states
just to land
in your
head.




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