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Haiku's on the day and whats on the way
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Haiku's on the day and whats on the way |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
The wind tickles me glad for the sun was smiling what a splendid day I felt quite refresh for the breeze was like water my mouth wide open lawns cut and watered it smelled like watermelon me filled with hunger I smell warm gravel the heat playing tricks on me then I smelled grilled meat As I walk along I look for trees above me for cool shaded leaves Pollen fills the air being bathe within nectar this felt delightful Soon the sun will set the sky shall be splashed with stars I will sleep under Dreaming of the day filled with the things I have seen good night my dear friends |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"What a splendid day." Indeed! I felt like I was there that day. Thank you for your poem, ebonygirl |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
best string of haikus I think I've ever read |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Looks like you've got Haiku writing down pat, ken. Ida |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Yes a wonderful day it is zippity doo dah zippity yah!! Cute poem... ~~~kingsangel~~~ [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (07-31-2011 11:25 PM).] |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Ebonygirl- Thanks glad you enjoyed being there. Martiniat8- Happy that you enjoyed"the best string of haiku's that you have ever read" truly I am. Marchmadness- Yes i have done plenty of them and enjoys doing them thanks for reading. Angel4aKing- Glad you like them. |
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