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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-07-26 05:06 PM


The nights are long
Time spent is ugly
Fire in the belly
Still burns as before

Questioning Heaven
And where it may lie
It's not time to go
I can't make the cut

Spellbound by the moon
A moonrock echo
Maybe that's Heaven
Armstrong never said

It is two o'clock
Window drapes are pulled
Streetlight says hello
But not the shadows

Shadows, secrets kept
I don't like shadows
Still, I look at them
They've stolen my soul

That's why I sit here
Each night I open
Window drapes to see
Shadows look at me

Though I am soulless
The moon is my friend
It shines the brightest
When I feel like this

Trying, but failing
To light the shadows
To prove what they are
Deceitful and false

And I thank the moon
For trying so hard
But the shadows pull
Me into their dark

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-07-26 06:41 PM


It's okay Jerry, I'm scared of the dark too

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-07-26 06:55 PM


Haha! Good, Lori, I have pleasant company. Thanks for holding my hand.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-07-26 06:59 PM


any time my friend, any time.
Michael
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4 posted 2011-07-26 07:16 PM


I've read this twice JP, and being the shadow delving, night loving person I am, I find myself adamantly wanting to defend your shadows.  Okay, so they're deceitful... I'll give you that.  But they are very real... and in the end you joined them, right?  Must be that misery and company thing... gets me every time you know.

Good poem, but close your eyes and listen to the silence sometimes...  

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-07-26 08:15 PM


Oh, I hear the silence, Michael, and shadows don't frighten me, it is what is hiding in them that is cause for alarm. And yes, you are correct, I did join them. Actually shadows and I have a long and strange relationship. I stayed in the shadows for about four decades, thought I would never see the light. And after I finally saw the light it scared the shit outta me. Can't win, can we?

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

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