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ebonygirl
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0 posted 2011-07-26 03:25 PM



Amethyst


It rained Amethyst on me today.

Breezes whispered my name to say.

Love, Joy, Fun coming my way.

It rained Amethyst on me today.


E. M. L.

© Copyright 2011 E. M. L. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-07-26 05:10 PM


That's what I call a giving rain, ebonygirl.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2011-07-27 02:04 AM


Pretty. It must have been February.
                              Ida

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2011-07-27 07:56 AM


ms ebony...let the predictions occur...

enjoyed it ms

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-07-27 02:25 PM


Yes, Ida, it was February.

Thank you Dark and JerryPat2
for your words.
Ms. ebony

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I am glad that your sight was not obscured by an umbrella.  If it had been, maybe you would not have written such a lovely poem.

Alison

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2011-08-29 09:49 PM


Thank you Alison for you kind words.
Ms. E

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7 posted 2011-08-31 09:20 PM


Lovely!!!
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8 posted 2011-09-01 05:12 AM


The rain is a magical whisperer when we listen deep.

Very beautiful, dear Ebonygirl.

Love,
Margherita

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I am mastered totally by Love."
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9 posted 2011-09-01 05:34 AM


Short and sweet...thank you for the sip of sweetness..

Goldenrose.

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easy1
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10 posted 2011-09-01 05:36 AM


Very succinct, yet paints a good picture.

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11 posted 2011-09-01 11:39 AM


Oh, I LIKE this! I believe I wrote
an amethyst poem once, but not as
lovely as this one!


JamesMichael
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12 posted 2011-09-01 07:13 PM


Nice...James
ebonygirl
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13 posted 2011-09-01 07:18 PM


Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem.
You are all very kind to comment,
Thank you,Ms. E

faithmairee
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14 posted 2011-09-01 09:00 PM


very nicely done...i enjoyed it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ebonygirl
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15 posted 2011-09-01 11:09 PM


Thank you Faithmariee,
Ms. E

JL
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16 posted 2011-09-02 09:22 AM


Very nice write.



JL

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Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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17 posted 2011-09-02 11:55 PM


I've never had Amethyst rain on me, but if it is anything like you say it is, I am ready for it.
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18 posted 2011-09-03 02:54 PM


Loved this.
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19 posted 2011-09-03 03:11 PM


My favorite gem made for a gem of a poem. Lovely words ebonygirl.

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20 posted 2011-09-04 04:09 PM


must have been a great experience to merit a poem!  thanks

HAF

ebonygirl
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21 posted 2011-09-04 05:43 PM


Dear Alive,
It was transformational,
Thank you,
Ms.E


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22 posted 2011-09-05 02:01 PM


Lovely, MsE.  Well worth a second read.

A

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